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Trevor Rogers's avatar

Loved this chapter the description of the shopping trip and piercings was spot on

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John Elliot's avatar

Thanks Trevor. I’m such a slow writer. I’m still working on the next chapter.

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Trevor Rogers's avatar

It was our fabled writer Kate Granger that told me to look at your writing and I very glad she did you might be slow but what you turn out is brilliant

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John Elliot's avatar

Oh wow, thank you Trevor.

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